清教英语高手

lytrans

原文:
Dear sir/madam:

Do you received the Invitation for Bids about optical mirror? If you are interseted in this project, please contacted us as soon as possible. The registation time is numbered.

P.S.
1. Attached please find the Technical Specifications of this Bid.


修改后:
Do you received the ,从语法上讲是不对的,修改为Did you received the...,不过你说这句话的意思是想问她有没有收到,是对现在的影响,所以最好用现在完成时.Have you received the ....

please contacted us ．．please后面一般用原形please contact us..语气委婉一些可以考虑would you please contact us.

1. Attached please .attached最好改成attachment.

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